tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7121324760188517565.post3671753148188131293..comments2023-04-29T15:58:56.150+01:00Comments on Anastasija Strelcova (BA) Computer Animation Arts: "Birds" reviewAnastasijaStrelcovahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12792505018633509706noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7121324760188517565.post-82965505725011427872017-02-13T10:24:56.768+00:002017-02-13T10:24:56.768+00:00Another well thought through review Anastasija.
B...Another well thought through review Anastasija.<br /><br />Be careful of statements like this one -<br />'Later Annie was found dead, probably Melanie’s jealousy in the form of birds killed her.' <br />Using 'probably' is a bit too assumptive... you could say something like,<br />'Later Annie was found dead, and it could be inferred that it was Melanie’s jealousy in the form of birds killed her.'Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com